A cat’s revenge

The cat was planning its revenge when it’s owner questioned its suspicious gaze.

“Why are you looking at me like that?” she asked, narrowing her eyes at the cat. “Do you have a problem?”


“I see how it is. I haven’t got time for a fight. Go away please.”

The cat didn’t move.

She put her hands on her hips and blew a strand of hair from her face. She loved the stupid feline, but sometimes its watchful green eyes unnerved her.

Reaching out nervously, she gave the cat a pat. “I can’t stay mad at you.”

Seven days and counting.



1. Write a scene with dialogue.

2. Summarise the scene.

3. Work the summary into the scene.

(My summary was from the cat’s POV and it became so much better!)


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